Issues Raised...
- Test Lowercase letters on development sheets
- Solid bottom looks slightly contrasting to the concept due to me saying pessimist and optimist
- The badge could lose some detail when point size is smaller but overall works as it still gives enough
detail which draws your attention into it and makes you look harder.
- Try creating some sentences to see if it would work as a type face
- Interesting and has strength from close and a distance, the concept has a strong outcome. change the
few issues which has been listed above and overall it will be successful design outcome.
Action To Be Taken...
- Redo the final outcome on the A1 sheet and make it neater, also change the bottom area to a solid
black crisp outline and then the lines only on the top area!
- Scale down brackets to fit into the area better so they dont run off the page
- Dont mess up on the colons
- Test the letter 'J's positioning as it could look better to the right but it then could leave to large of a gap
to the left and look more awkward.
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