Final Images Message and Delivery

This is the final images for our last project which we had to create, 'Message and Delivery'  the outcome shows how the small text is to hard to read without the use of the magnifier glass, the envelope has been stamped with a hand crafted set of wood block print, this gives it the style army official look, it then has the two sides of the story this is shown from how the one side is censored and the other isn't, this gives the way of the two outcomes. this makes you want to look at it more but i think if i had to improve it i would go back and maybe add a spot colour in to make it more effective and draw the attention of the selected more.