Feedback Two For 'No News Is Good News'

What statement / fact / question is being communicated to you?

The fact that so many civilians in Iraq are being injured from violence in the war. I think he hand pouring out the signs represent that no enough attention is being given to calm the problem down. also theirs a spelling mistake 'Civillian'

Is this being communicated in a clear and focused way?  [ Yes ] 

Maybe making the hand in the image + type poster the main focus. The image is really strong and communicates the message effectively so could make the type + image posters more attention grabbing.

Have the posters been kept simple and to the point?, also is this a Fact, Question or statement?  [ Yes ] 

A fact. it states numbers and statistics which makes the message easier to understand. The 98,585 is big and bold which shouts the problem to you.

Has the restrictions of the two colours plus stock been met?  [ Yes ]

Are the two colours plus stock appropriate for the solution?  [ Yes ]

Why are the two colours plus stock appropriate/inappropriate?

Green represents the army. The green and black works well on the simple white stock

Do the posters work as a set or series?  [ Yes ] 

Why do they work / dont work as a part of a set series and could this be developed further?

Maybe a bit repetitive? They all link in with each other as individual posters they really strong and bold but when placed as a set, they become to similar.

Is it clearly evident which poster is TYPE, IMAGE and TYPE & IMAGE?

YES. Theirs no confusion. Stuck to the concept well.

Are the posters "memorable, immediate high impact and clear"? 

Yes. again as individual posters they have high impact but as a set they seem quite repetitive. Having said that i like the idea of feeding the TYPE & IMAGE posters into the combination of the two in the last one.

Do you feel the brief fulfilled to its full potential ?  [ Unsure ] 

I think with a little more work and alterations it can be a really strong visual piece of work. Maybe making the images more diverse and different will make the posters work better and not just individually.